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Smile ReturnI once had a beautiful smileThat showedFor a mileUntil someone cracked the codeMany would find it hardTo ever smile againAfter being squarer that a cardAnd feeling like water going down a drainOr losing the one's you lovedThe family you knew bestNow looks at you with unlovedNo wonder I am so stressedBut this is not my faultI tell myself over and overLike a wound with saltThis won't end until I find a cloverYet you find a wayEvery few daysTo make me feel grayAnd set my feelings ablazeMost would thinkHow anyone could smile againWhen not even a drinkOr leaving on a trainCould reform this codeAnd lock the mysteriesAway in the frosted snowAnd make this all historiesIt pains me to knowThat this cannot take placeUntil the glowOf spaceAllows a personOne that lovesOne that will not worsenAnd will be as peaceful as dovesTo take my heartAnd never let goUse it to make new artAnd allow this smile to regrow
Fixing All Those AchesWoke up this morningWith only one thing on my mindJust looking for that signI should have listened to that warningBut now I am leftLooking for a new wayTo commit this theftListen to what I have to sayBecause now I am goneAnd so are you tooLike a baby swanThat in now feeling the blueHope is all that remainsAnd a promise to holdJust like St. ThomasI sure hope it is as good as goldOne day I knowThat all this will be forgottenAnd I will have everything to showWhile saying good bye to the rottenUntil that day comesMoving on I shallListening to those drumsAnd hanging with a new palWith the hour glass sandTime heals many breaksReforming the old bandAnd fixing all those achesOnce that time has arrivedI will be here waitingHaving survivedThis long wait of your hatingJust know we all take different trailsAnd there is no reasonThat we can't tell talesOf a new seasonOne where all is rightOne where we are friendsOne where we do not fightOne that never endsIf
My LastCould this day be my last (echo?)The clock has sure been tickingand It sure has been a blastMan we sure had some good timesLike when we drunk till sunriseBut I feel this one may be my lastMy last(Echo)My last(Echo)Ohhhh I feel that this may be my lastI have lost all controlThe room is spinningEverything is going dark...The battle has begunWill I see the light?Or will it end up being just the sunThis has to be my last!My last(Echo)My last(Echo)Ohhhhhh I feel that this may be my lastI have been chosenTo see another dayAll I can sayIs Thank you for such a thingI will try not to waste itFor surely this should have been my lastMy Last(Echo)My Last(Echo)Ohhhhh will tomorrow be my last?My lastLastLast(echos out with last being repeated)