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What is this ? by ~B0ugiies edit by er111a What is this ? by ~B0ugiies edit by er111a
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:iconluckydesigns:
Awh, this is such an adorable shot! You've captured such a sweet, innocent side of the kitten, excellent work! :clap:

I'm going to try a little different style of formatting for this critique, hope it's not too harsh or anything. :heart:

Vision - I think you had a great concept with this photo! I get the feeling that the cat is watching something in the distance, which makes me wonder about it and notice even more details.

Originality - I only gave you three stars for originality, because there are a ton of cat photos pretty similar to this. There's really nothing that makes it extremely unique, though the black and white was a good choice.

Technique - The focus is wonderful, the shallow DoF works really well with this photo. The cat is in focus while the soft background makes the details even more sharp and clear. I also like how you filled the frame, though it is a bit crowded. Perhaps you could've zoomed out to capture the whiskers and ears as well.

Impact - The eyes are so intense, they really add to the photo and make it more interesting. I love how the atmosphere is so dynamic and soft at the same time. Great work! :love:

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Chimekitten Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist
That cat...looks so focused (on something) and cute! :)
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er111a Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student Photographer
Thanks! Sadly I only did the editing!
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Chimekitten Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist
But it still looks great~ :3
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er111a Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student Photographer
awww thank you! :la:
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Eternal-Iktomi Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
Exquisitely Done, Great Shot :)
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er111a Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you :)
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Francundo Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
:)
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:iconer111a:
er111a Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Photographer
:)
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RaquelBlanco Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Professional Photographer
Niiiiiiiiiice !!
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:iconer111a:
er111a Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you! :D
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rsiphotography Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Professional General Artist
One of the things that makes this good is the eye is tack sharp at the law of thirds cross section.
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:iconer111a:
er111a Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student Photographer
I wish I could say I took this photo :(
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syellameonk Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The expression really serious, it's so cute xD
really good editing!
B&W makes the eyes and fur more detail.
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er111a Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you! :D
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galactica1actual Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student Photographer
Lovely black and white. The absence of color brings out a lot of details in the fur and eyes.
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er111a Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student Photographer
Well Thank you! :D
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NikaParadise Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice cat and good editing)) I really like his eyes^^
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:iconer111a:
er111a Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you! :)
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Inversions51 Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
hey i don't have enough energy to right a full on critique but this is pretty awesome! i must agree i have seen plenty of cat pictures like this but i think the lighting and the B&W of it is really captivating. i think the lack of colors in this works better than the original because the colors make it a little busy where the B&W makes it calm. and very intense/focused.
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er111a Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you glad I edited it to your liking! :)
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Shierrr Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is amazing. Very sharp and a beautiful pose. The cat has a humorous look on its face. =D
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er111a Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Photographer
haha well thank you, but I can only take credit for editing it :)
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Shierrr Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Well, it's a beautiful editing, too. =)
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er111a Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Photographer
thank you! :)
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